The Ultimate BFF

i am starting a story and it is called the ultimate bff. i posted the beginning of it and you can send in your comments of what you think so far.

The Ultimate BFF

“Who needs her, it’s not like she needs us either. Right?”
“Well Ashley.”
“No you can’t be on her side, come on you just can’t. I can’t believe you, you never root for me!”
“Ashley you can’t always say that you are always blaming other people for your problems. You blame your Mom for not putting your homework in your backpack!”
“Well she doesn’t! Uh just forget it I’ll see you tomorrow.”


Oh, hi sorry I didn’t see you there. You must be new here, well why don’t I introduce myself. I’m Kara and that was Ashley we go to school here at Treeville High. As you can see it’s not a very pleasant school and a lot of strange things have been happening lately. Well you should know that it’s a private girls school only. We have one dace a year and the boys’ school comes here but no one talks or dances. Well tomorrow is Tuesday and I’ll see you in class.


Tuesday

“Hey Reader over here! First hour sucks big. Right now we are reviewing Strong Winds.”
“Kara, hi did you talk to Ashley yesterday?”
“Yah, why?”
“She has been acting really weird lately and she defiantly needs to cool off!”
“Oh, Reader this is Maria, Maria this is Reader.” Kara introduced.
“Hi Reader just make sure you stay away from Ashley she is like out of the loop!” Maria rudely added.
“Hey guys, oh hi Maria.”
“Ashley you have to cool it.” Maria screeched.
“Hey no yelling, now sit down in your seats and we will start the lesson.” Announced Mrs. Kopecky.
“Class we have a new student their name is Reader.”